The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children’s charity located in the USA spent and received in 2016.

The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children’s charity located in the USA spent and received in 2016.
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The pie charts show how a children’s
charity
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in the United States collected and spent its funds over the course of a year. The first chart is divided into six different revenue sources,
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the second is divided into three different expenditure purposes.
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it is clear that
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the foundation obtained the majority of its funds from donated food.
On the other hand
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, it spent the majority of its funds on program services.
To begin
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, 86.6
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of revenue for
this
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children’s
charity
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came from donated food in a year, which is more than eight times as much as community contributions (10.4
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). These two
income
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sources accounted for exactly 97
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of total
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.
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, more than 2% of
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was lost. At the same time, the
charity
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had to spend nearly 96
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of its budget on program services. The remaining 4.2
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of expenditures were for fundraising, with the remainder going to management and general purposes. It is worth noting that the total
income
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was $53,561,580, which was just enough to cover the expenditures of $53,224,896. By the end of the year, the
charity
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had saved just over $330,000.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words charity, percent, income with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "divided" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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