Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion

There is an ongoing debate about whether advertising can play a significant role towards individuals or not.

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some people who often receive advertisements find it is general and start to ignore them, I totally believe that it can

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our purchasing habits. Recently, people have

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received numerous notifications from marketing services but have no interest in them anymore and start to

over look

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all of them. After seeing special things too frequently, individuals will gradually reduce

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excitement feelings which they

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to

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and think of

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as

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ordinary

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.

For example

, six years ago, when bubbles tea have been introduced to public society every

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groups have been grabbed their attention

due to

the impact of

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the internet

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or celebrities, but after trying it once or seeing it more on

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, youtube channels or other sites, they began to think of it as one of

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general drinks or beverages.

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, there are a great

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of customers who switch their

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after watching or looking at the ads. When people

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or unsure of something, they will search for extra information, and

this

is where advertisers begin their role; giving other some details or review and

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it could influence the way they believe.

For instance

, online shoppers admitted that it was extremely hard to purchase things because they all use similar

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but the price is unequal.

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reading every feedback and

recommendations

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, they decided to buy it without any

hesitate

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. In conclusion, even though receiving or hearing things more than usual can make it become normal and make customers lose interest,

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think it can be a crucial reason why they change their thought and desire after having more information or details.