Scientists agree that individuals are harming their
health
by overeating fast
food
.Some individuals believe that the solution to
this
issue is to educate
people
.Others feel education will not make
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. In my opinion,
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taxes
and regulations on unhealthy
food
is more effective than
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people
.
On the one hand, some think
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educationReplace the word
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people
about
harmfulCorrect article usage
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of unhealthy
food
is
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way to tackle issues regarding overconsuming of junk
food
.
For example
, the government could organize educational campaigns and workshops in order to raise awareness among
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about
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negative impacts of eating too much fast
food
on their
health
.
Therefore
,raising
among
people
can contribute to
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overallAdd an article
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health
of
people
.
On the other hand
, I would like to agree with those
people
who believe education will not work and I would like to suggest some
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to address
this
issue. The first effective solution,
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authorities can implement
taxes
on
food
, which
this
step can discourage
people
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eating too much junk
food
.
Consequently
,
taxes
on junk
food
will force
people
to
their
food
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their homes
instead
of
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fast
food
forChange preposition
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restaurants.
Furthermore
, the government can introduce strict regulations related to
food
.
For instance
, the government could introduce harsh laws to force
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restaurants to make their
food
healthy via reduce the
of fat.
As a result
,
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food
will become
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to
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individuals Change noun form
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health
.
To sum up
, from my perspective,
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better method to tackle
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of
people
eating too much unhealthy
food
is
via Change preposition
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impose
taxes
on fast
food
and introduce
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new regulations
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of
wayCorrect article usage
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of
prepareChange the form of the verb
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food
in
to make it less detrimental to
people
health
.