In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing.
For decades, the enthusiasm for urbanization is being enhanced among rural inhabitants. There has been a sharp decrease in the population of villages. I completely disagree with
this
point of view. In Linking Words
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essay, I will explain my view with relevant examples appropriately.
On the one hand, a growing number of people ponder that Linking Words
this
process has negative impacts on agricultural fields since there are few workers to cultivate crops. Linking Words
In other words
, arable lands are abandoned owing to the lack of young labourers to work in comparison with the past. The result of a survey in Iran explored that there are a thousand hectares around Tehran which are remained useless since their owners settle in Tehran Linking Words
instead
of utilizing those arable lands. Linking Words
As a result
, the government has to import vegetables and fruits and Linking Words
hence
, the prices of these crops have risen dramatically.
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On the other hand
, the majority of nations consider that Linking Words
this
trend has valuable merit concerning the educational period. Linking Words
Besides
, most of the children in rural areas are suffered from basic skills Linking Words
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as literacy and numeracy ; Linking Words
therefore
, procreators' decision to head to conurbations enhances the chance of having access to decent schools, libraries and universities in their offspring. Linking Words
For instance
, well-known Persian surgeon Dr Mohammad Samie is a good example of a child who had been taken to Tehran by his parents and become successful around the globe. Linking Words
As a consequence
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prevalent perspective has a positive aspect on rural children and Linking Words
thus
, gives a helping hand to have a more educated society.
In conclusion, the consideration of living in metropolitan cities has been rising all around the world ;Linking Words
however
, it has a negative effect on agriculture. Linking Words
Conversely
, it has a perfect aspect on rural societies' teenagers. Personally, in my opinion, its disadvantages will outweigh the advantages Linking Words
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