Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide people with a better education. To what extent do you agree?

In modern times, the issue of

crime

has become a matter of discussion. There are those who say that most countries deal with

crime

by sending people to

prison

.

However

, others believe that providing individuals with higher

education

is a more effective solution. In

this

essay, I completely agree with

this

statement for reasons I will outline below. From an

overall

perspective, there are two main reasons why I believe that

prison

is a necessary place for social security.

This

is because detaining people who engage in criminal activities, especially serious crimes

such

as robbery, murder and rape

to ensure

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the safety of other citizens.

Moreover

, imposing

tricter

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strict

punishments on these which prevent them from

commit

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crime

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.

As a result

, knowing that being arrested means that they will lose their freedom and live a

life

of

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prison

, which makes them not dare to do wrong. If there weren’t a

prison

, offenders would create a violent culture and pose a serious threat to society.

On the other hand

,

education

is a measure to reduce

crime

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rate. When authorities provide

education

, citizens would have enough knowledge about the damage that

crime

will cause to the community and themselves

as well as

leaving serious injuries to their loved ones

lead

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to

decrease

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in high

crime

.

Beside

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that, possessing some qualifications through basic

education

such

as vocational training contributes to stabilizing their social

life

, thereby reducing the thought of doing illegal acts. In conclusion,

this

criminal

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is a topic which raises strong passions on both sides of the argument. Having considered both sides of the issue, I would argue that imprisonment

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a vital role to balance social

life

and

education

is the best way to improve the rate of

crime

. If the authorities implement

this

policy, it will provide a better

life

for future generations.