In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message

In the modern world, most of the new generations preferred to do their things alone without following any advice or recommendations from parents.

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the advantages, of encouraging children to work hard and achieve their targets and dreams will definitely help them to build a good confident personality and

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most of the kids who were working and helping their families usually became stronger in leadership

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and deliver more success stories on different levels.

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, the disadvantages of pushing the children to

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will impact their capabilities and concerns on their abilities to deliver or

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real value added to their society and community,

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could affect their level of confidence to handle things,

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, some smart and good students are failed after they graduate to success in their career path

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the hard push they

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to do based on their parents

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and believe. in conclusion, having a good way and balance of learning a good kind of

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for children will encourage them to work very hard on it to make and create a good generation with more

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and knowledge, rather than providing a hard kind of work or activities who can it think alone without

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from others.