Some people think that public transport should be funded by the government so that it can be free to the people who use it. Do you agree or disagree?

In contrast

with the past, the public transport system is more developed. It is argued that government should act as

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so residents can use free public vehicles. I opine that authorities do not need to utilize

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for

this

type of public spending. On the one hand, it is understandable why many people believe that complimentary transport is the best way for everyone since many fates are witnessed in wretched conditions. Indeed, many penniless inhabitants can not afford mass transit in daily commuting and

then

, they decide to have personal vehicles so it raises traffic jams and devastated infrastructure when it cannot respond to the huge amount of cars and motorbikes on the roads. It

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generates a large

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of emissions in the atmosphere.

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and other species can be influenced by a contaminated environment,

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, lots of residents want governments' support for

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the expenditure

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of public

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to reduce disadvantages.

On the other hand

, I believe that authorities should require consumers a certain amount of money to hold a stable economy and not interfere

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other social obstacles.

Initially

, some countries

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cannot pay for

this

due to

being undeveloped enough; thence, the standard of their inhabitants’ life do not safeguard like other wealthy nations

such

as the USA and UK.

Consequently

, to ensure

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climate, they do not have the ability to fund all these vehicles.

Besides

, they should command a tiny figure to operate

this

, pay for human resources and balance other pressing public problems that are still inadequate in use

such

as hospitals,

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and

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for unemployees rather than mass

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.

For

this

reason, people need to spend a little salary to minimize these issues. In conclusion, I suppose that governments can support the price of public

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,

however

, they should still collect money from citizens to execute the system before expecting it to be free.