Both government investment in public transport systems and reductions in public transport ticket prices would help to reduce transport pollution greatly. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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One of the most pressing issues of the modern-day is air pollution which has been causing differences of opinion among the mass. Some critics argue investing extra in the public
transportation
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sector and decreasing the charges for tickets would significantly reduce pollutants emission from transport. I believe there is a potential in
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argument and it should be explored.
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, nowadays almost everyone relies on any means of
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- be it a streetcar, public bus, subway train, or private vehicles.
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, private vehicles have been dominant in the
last
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few years owing to their comfort, convenience of traveling, and safety.
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is in comparison to public means of
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which is likely considered risky, and uncomfortable.
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, if the additional budget would be allocated,
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the mass commute vehicles would likely upgrade their sitting arrangments, and perhaps the different and more frequent routes of travel enticing people to use public commutes.
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,
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the funds, if the prices would be reduced,
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that would most probably increase the affordability for daily commute users who are unable to travel
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their lack of financial prospects. Reducing the price would be a certain way to attain their attention and increase the number of public commutes. It is
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this
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reason, I believe the prices should be lessened to gain the desired results. In conclusion, in order to mitigate air pollution, an increase in public
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numbers is vital, and investing an additional budget in the commuting sector
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a decrease in tickets would seem a wise investment.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainable transport
  • carbon footprint
  • mass transit
  • subsidization
  • fare reduction
  • environmental impact
  • urban planning
  • public policy
  • commuter behavior
  • infrastructural development
  • economic efficiency
  • equitable access
  • lifestyle shift
  • congestion
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