Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about computer courses that really interests you, but it is only for people who completed elementary course. write a letter to the college enrollment officer. In your letter, explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enroll in the course

Dear Sir, I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am writing
this
letter
express
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my interest in studying computing.
However
, I have not
take
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the elementary
course
before. Allow me to elaborate on the situation.
Firstly
,I am excited about the advertisement that you posted on your front page website, and your
course
really caught my attention.
As a result
, I want to apply to
enroll
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for the next computing class. Unfortunately, my major is Industrial Engineering, considering my academic background, I do not have any particular skill or knowledge about computing.
In addition
, I have never studied
about
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coding before, so
i
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I
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would like to enhance my ability in computing by attending your
course
. I kindly request your assistance if you could provide me
a
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special exception in participating
the
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course
, as I have
keen
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interest in learning about computer skills.
Furthermore
, I greatly appreciate
if
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you can grant my desire. Thank you for considering my request. I am looking forward to your reply.
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Sincerely,
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