News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

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assert that

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that go

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news

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stories make them more impactful. I agree with

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because

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enhance the reality of the reports, and graphics in

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describe the

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. First of all, visual communication is a powerful tool which provides recognisable facts. Some

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hear all happenings around the world via radio. Many listeners are easily distracted because radio is just background music

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visuals used on television make the reports more interesting and compel the audience to sit and watch.

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news

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channels use graphical

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representations

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of the spread of coronavirus in each state with the number of new cases and death.

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statistical graph delivers a clear message to the viewers / audience and

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mostly beneficial for conveying information to the busy and uneducated sections of

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society.

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, including snapshots in

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increases the sale. Nowadays,

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cannot read all the

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stories as they have several commitments. An

info graphic

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, which gives the gist of the whole

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can help

people

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decide if it is relevant or important for them so that they can go through the full paragraph.

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, the use of tables or

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photos of

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related to the

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in the newspaper attracts

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to read the whole content. Having said that, written information is

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significant because words describe the picture. A picture does not reveal the purpose of the

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picture of an accident scene without

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describing it is difficult to understand. So, both are equally critical for publishing

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, I believe that including

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with

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stories

help

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helps

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people

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get a better understanding of the story. Written information is

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equally important for conveying

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people

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and

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merely complement

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– they cannot replace

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

303 words

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empathize
instantaneous comprehension
irrefutable evidence
transcend language barriers
overreliance
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misinformation
desensitizing
nuance
in-depth analysis
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News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

As a result of tourism, many historical buildings and sites are being damaged beyond repair. What could be done to prevent this?

University education should be free to everyone, regardless of income. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

University students often focus on one subject. However, some people think that universities should encourage students to learn a range of other subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?