Some people believe that homework should not be given to school children. Others, however, say that homework is an important requirement for children to be able to develop appropriately. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, young generations argue that
homework
is not essential for elementary students. It should not be allowed. Others ,
however
, believe that
homework
is
one
method to
increase
the
student
's ability in studying
as well as
to build their character. I strongly believe that
homework
is a paramount aspect of
children
's life in order to
increase
their responsibility and to gain the best
student
learning achievement.
This
essay will explore clearly and provide evidence. Let's start by talking about the cons.
Homework
should not be given to schoolchildren. Some people believe that
homework
will
increase
stress among those because students had finished learning many subjects in
school
, but they have to do additional tasks at home. many parents believe
this
will become a burden for
children
. Take
one
case from
one
city in Indonesia, a parent reported a teacher from an elementary
school
thanks to the teacher gave a laden of
homework
that made their kid stressed and depressed. In
this
case,
homework
becomes causing mental disorders among
children
.
secondly
, moving to the pros argue that
homework
should be allowed for
children
. Some parents believe giving
homework
to
children
after
school
will build extra
student
abilities
such
as responsibility, ability in time management.
increase
student
insight in critical thinking which all of them are beneficial aspects in
student
character building.
For example
, Nono, a
student
from
one
remote area elementary
school
, in NTT province, Indonesia, aged 8 years old, won the world mathematics competence recently.
One
of the strategies which is reported by his teacher was
homework
. giving extra mathematics
homework
work increased his achievement. In conclusion, even though some argue that
homework
becomes a burden among
children
students, in my point of view I believe that the benefits aspect of
homework
outweigh its downside.
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