It is more important for school children to learn local history than world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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is often a compulsory subject in education in the

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because of

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necessary for

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individuals

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and

societies

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. It is argued that students should focus on learning the

history

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of their own

countries

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and lower their concentration on the

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of other

societies

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. In my opinion,

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of which should be studied equally and carefully. It is true that local

history

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is an indispensable discipline in education. On

individual

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an individual

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level, those who acquire knowledge about their own country’s

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can be aware of their roots and acquire insights into their cultures.

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would bring benefits to the

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and behaviour of

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with their comparison and even

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personality traits which

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are ảesuitable

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ảesuitable

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suitable

for their

societies

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. On

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a societal

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level, learning more about historic events that took place in a country can foster

patriotism

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of its residents.

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, the population would become loyal to their country and try to contribute to the country’s development, meaning a thriving and civilized society.

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,

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history

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also

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should be focused on owing to its importance to the development of

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countries

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and their residents.

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is because, thanks to learning the

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of other

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in the

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, students can have

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general thinking about other

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countries’

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history

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and culture, leading to respect for other nations.

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, having an insight into cultures can

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encourage the integration among

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and

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is a great way to deal with racism which is occurring in some parts of the

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, resulting in a peaceful and civilized

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. In conclusion, I believe that

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local and

world

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history

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are

both

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equally important for not only

individuals

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and

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but

also

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the

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,

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and

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both

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of

which

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should be learned carefully.