More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people suggest that the solution to this problem is to increase the price of fattening foods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today's world,
obesity
is becoming a big Use synonyms
problem
in many parts of the world. Recently, the number of obsessed Use synonyms
people
is increasing so fast that some suggest that, the main culprits like fast Use synonyms
food
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, needed to be taxed to discourage Use synonyms
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essay will try to argue that increasing the Linking Words
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junk
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food
will not help Use synonyms
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fight Use synonyms
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obesity
crisis.
In human history, Use synonyms
obesity
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before. The Linking Words
obesity
pandemic is a very modern Use synonyms
problem
, in the past, it is very hard to find poor Use synonyms
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who were overweight Use synonyms
in contrast
to the present where most of the obsessed Linking Words
people
come from low-income households. The main cause of Use synonyms
this
is that most of the time the only Linking Words
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these low-income Use synonyms
people
can afford is either low-quality and low-Use synonyms
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fast Use synonyms
food
or heavily processed Use synonyms
food
that has low nutrition but high sugar and fat to compensate for the low-quality ingredient used to keep the Use synonyms
price
low. By levying the tax on Use synonyms
junk
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food
industries it will, in reality, make the Use synonyms
problem
much worse than it already is. If Use synonyms
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food
increases in Use synonyms
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then
it will force Linking Words
people
who can bearly afford to consume Use synonyms
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already low-quality product to find the even lower-quality alternative.
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In contrast
, rather than put a tax on low-quality Linking Words
food
it is better to spend money subsidizing or cutting taxes on healthy Use synonyms
food
options. If the root cause of Use synonyms
obesity
comes from overconsumption of low-quality consumption goods Use synonyms
then
the solution is to change the consumer choice. Since Linking Words
food
is an essential part of life it is impossible to tell Use synonyms
people
to eat less expressly to those low-income who bearly scrape by even with low-cost fast Use synonyms
food
. Giving some incentives, like lowering taxes on healthier option products or subsidizing high-quality unprocessed ingredients, to fast Use synonyms
food
chains and Use synonyms
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manufacturers to produce healthier products for the same Use synonyms
price
as the unhealthy product can help solve the overweight Use synonyms
problem
in the lower class who the most susceptible to the Use synonyms
obesity
pandemic.
In conclusion . For many Use synonyms
people
being obsessed didn't come from their personal choice but the lack of choices that cause them to resort to fattening Use synonyms
food
for sustenance. By giving those Use synonyms
people
a healthier affordable option, it will help them much more in the long term than to just increasing the prices of Use synonyms
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food
which is their only option for Use synonyms
food
. And Use synonyms
that is
why I strongly disagree with increasing fast Linking Words
food
prices as a solution to the Use synonyms
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