More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people suggest that the solution to this problem is to increase the price of fattening foods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In today's world,
obesity
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is becoming a big
problem
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in many parts of the world. Recently, the number of obsessed
people
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is increasing so fast that some suggest that, the main culprits like fast
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and unhealthy
food
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, needed to be taxed to discourage
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from consuming too much.
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essay will try to argue that increasing the
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of
junk
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food
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will not help
people
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fight
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obesity
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crisis. In human history,
obesity
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was never run rampant like
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before. The
obesity
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pandemic is a very modern
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, in the past, it is very hard to find poor
people
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who were overweight
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to the present where most of the obsessed
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come from low-income households. The main cause of
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is that most of the time the only
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these low-income
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can afford is either low-quality and low-
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fast
food
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or heavily processed
food
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that has low nutrition but high sugar and fat to compensate for the low-quality ingredient used to keep the
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low. By levying the tax on
junk
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food
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industries it will, in reality, make the
problem
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much worse than it already is. If
junk
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food
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increases in
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then
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it will force
people
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who can bearly afford to consume
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already low-quality product to find the even lower-quality alternative.
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, rather than put a tax on low-quality
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it is better to spend money subsidizing or cutting taxes on healthy
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options. If the root cause of
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comes from overconsumption of low-quality consumption goods
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the solution is to change the consumer choice. Since
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is an essential part of life it is impossible to tell
people
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to eat less expressly to those low-income who bearly scrape by even with low-cost fast
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. Giving some incentives, like lowering taxes on healthier option products or subsidizing high-quality unprocessed ingredients, to fast
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chains and
food
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manufacturers to produce healthier products for the same
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as the unhealthy product can help solve the overweight
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in the lower class who the most susceptible to the
obesity
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pandemic. In conclusion . For many
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being obsessed didn't come from their personal choice but the lack of choices that cause them to resort to fattening
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for sustenance. By giving those
people
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a healthier affordable option, it will help them much more in the long term than to just increasing the prices of
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food
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which is their only option for
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. And
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why I strongly disagree with increasing fast
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prices as a solution to the
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problem
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • obesity
  • overweight
  • fattening foods
  • calorie-dense
  • healthier food choices
  • taxation
  • economic implications
  • social implications
  • subsidies
  • nutritional education
  • public health campaigns
  • nanny state
  • individual's right
  • consumer behavior
  • preventative measures
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