More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people suggest that the solution to this problem is to increase the price of fattening foods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today's world,
obesity
is becoming a big problem
in many parts of the world. Recently, the number of obsessed people
is increasing so fast that some suggest that, the main culprits like fast food
and unhealthy food
, needed to be taxed to discourage people
from consuming too much. This
essay will try to argue that increasing the price
of junk
food
will not help people
fight this
obesity
crisis.
In human history, obesity
was never run rampant like this
before. The obesity
pandemic is a very modern problem
, in the past, it is very hard to find poor people
who were overweight in contrast
to the present where most of the obsessed people
come from low-income households. The main cause of this
is that most of the time the only food
these low-income people
can afford is either low-quality and low-price
fast food
or heavily processed food
that has low nutrition but high sugar and fat to compensate for the low-quality ingredient used to keep the price
low. By levying the tax on junk
food
industries it will, in reality, make the problem
much worse than it already is. If junk
food
increases in price
then
it will force people
who can bearly afford to consume this
already low-quality product to find the even lower-quality alternative.
In contrast
, rather than put a tax on low-quality food
it is better to spend money subsidizing or cutting taxes on healthy food
options. If the root cause of obesity
comes from overconsumption of low-quality consumption goods then
the solution is to change the consumer choice. Since food
is an essential part of life it is impossible to tell people
to eat less expressly to those low-income who bearly scrape by even with low-cost fast food
. Giving some incentives, like lowering taxes on healthier option products or subsidizing high-quality unprocessed ingredients, to fast food
chains and food
manufacturers to produce healthier products for the same price
as the unhealthy product can help solve the overweight problem
in the lower class who the most susceptible to the obesity
pandemic.
In conclusion . For many people
being obsessed didn't come from their personal choice but the lack of choices that cause them to resort to fattening food
for sustenance. By giving those people
a healthier affordable option, it will help them much more in the long term than to just increasing the prices of junk
food
which is their only option for food
. And that is
why I strongly disagree with increasing fast food
prices as a solution to the obesity
problem
.Submitted by kitvaratadadej on
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