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The table below gives information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in five countries in 2009.

The table below gives information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in five countries in 2009.
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The table chart illustrates the income of
teachers
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 in secondary and high school in five particular countries (2009), detailing their starting
salary
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, yearly
salary
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, highest achievable
salary
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 and the number of
years
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 it takes to reach the highest
salary
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. From an
overall
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 perspective, it can be seen clearly that
while
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Luxembourg
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teachers
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 had the highest
salary
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,
teachers
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 in Australia received the lowest sum of money.
In addition
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, the higher the maximum wages were, the longer time it took to reach these top
salaries
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. Looking at the initial pay,
educators
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 in
Luxembourg
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 received a noticeably higher
salary
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 compared to others (80,000 US
dollars
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/year), followed by Dennish
teachers
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'
salaries
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 at 47.600
dollars
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 and Australian
teachers
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'
salaries
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 (34.600
dollars
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). After 8-9
years
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, Australian and Dennish
educators
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 could reach their top
salaries
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 at 48,000$ and 54.000$ respectively. In general, after 15
years
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, the compensation of
teachers
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 in all five countries ranged from approximately 48,000
dollars
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 to over 50,000
dollars
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, and the wages for
Luxembourg
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educators
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 were nearly two times higher than the average. After 15-year working, whilst the incomes of
teachers
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 in
Luxembourg
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, Korea and Japan could increase more, the amount of money that
teachers
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 in Australia and Denmark received each year remained stable. Interestingly, to reach top
salaries
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, Korean, Japanese and
Luxembourg
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educators
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 had to work for around another 15
years
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words teachers, salary, years, luxembourg, salaries, educators, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 4 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • secondary/high school teachers
  • annual salary
  • gross income
  • net salary
  • cost of living
  • education funding
  • gender pay gap
  • teaching hours
  • years of experience
  • additional qualifications
  • economic indicators
  • average wage
  • currency conversion
  • educational disparities
  • international comparison
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