Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing to day. What are the causes of global warming and measures can goverments and individuals take to tackle the issue
It is known that global warming is a severe issue that the world is facing nowadays. Some causes of global warming are pollution and not recycling well at home.
Therefore
, possible solutions to these facts can be to use public transportation
and electric cars
and individuals
can improve their recycling habits.
Commuting to the city can be challenging for some people
from the outskirts and they use private transportation
for it. Furthermore
, the use of private transportation
such
as cars
or motorbikes, increases carbon dioxide emissions, having a devastating effect on the planet. Another problem the world faces is the low engagement in recycling by individuals
. People
don't feel motivated to have sustainable practices or they simply do not know. For example
, a neighbour who moved recently to the neighbourhood wasn't recycling anything. He was throwing all his disposals in the same container. One day, speaking with him, told me that his country did not recycle so he did not know about the recycling habits in Canada.
Solutions to these issues can be the promotion of using public transportation
having discounts for the people
who come from the outskirts and having economic assistance to buy electric cars
that improve carbon dioxide emissions to zero. In addition
, another solution for this
matter is to motivate individuals
to recycle with educational programs on how to do it and what are the benefits for the planet. For instance
, in my country Spain, the government give economic help to an individual who wants to buy an electric car, making a long-term improvement in reducing the emissions.
To conclude
, we need to face the problems of pollution and the lack of recycling motivation. We should address these problems by promoting public transportation
and helping individuals
buy electric cars
. Moreover
, motivating and educating people
on recycling methods and its benefits for the planet.Submitted by jessica.pastor.87 on
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task achievement
To strengthen your essay, consider expanding on specific examples and providing more detailed explanations of how the proposed solutions can effectively tackle global warming. Connect the causes and solutions more explicitly to demonstrate a deeper understanding of their interplay.
coherence cohesion
Maintain consistency in using transitional phrases between each paragraph to improve the logical flow of the essay. This will lead to stronger coherence.
coherence cohesion
Your essay presents a clear structure with a distinct introduction, body, and conclusion. Each section of the essay fulfills its intended role in the argument's development.
task achievement
The essay shows a good understanding of the causes of global warming and provides feasible solutions that both governments and individuals could implement.
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