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Some people think products should be made to last as long as possible, while others think making products cheap is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In the modern world, it is widely believed that consumers always looking for a good
quality
product
 and others looking for a good price,
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 will be discussing both opinions in the following paragraph. First of all, the safety and
quality
 of any
product
 should be always part of any production and mandatory checklist before they release it to the public,
therefore
 most government entities
such
 as customs stress the
product
 specs to avoid any impact on consumers, for ,instance the toys for kids usually come with instructions on how to be use and for which age as well, on the other ,hand
this
 is might be very expensive products which mean very few consumers can buy it.
Second,
producing a cheap
product
 might be good to meet customer's needs ,especially for low-income people,
therefore
 most of the low-priced items will be used for a short period
due to
quality
 issues and the type of materials they used,
whereas
 these goods serve the biggest community and most of the societies and most of the people preferred to buy it without considering the hidden risk, for ,instance there are some products impacting the environment
due to
 CO2. in conclusion, the needs for any
product
 are determined by
quality
 and price, so taking care of the products based on
quality
 only will affect consumer's behaviour and spending,
however
 having different ranges of the same
product
 with the same
quality
 and fewer functions or features will be much better from a safety perspective.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • durability
  • sustainability
  • longevity
  • affordability
  • consumerism
  • waste
  • environmental impact
  • value for money
  • customer satisfaction
  • brand loyalty
  • consumption
  • economic growth
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