The table below give information about Favourite Pastimes in different countries.
The given table contains information about Favourite Pastimes in different countries. The table is described below. There are 7 Countries and 7 activities.
Firstly
, there are 7 activity people do in their free time. In TV, in Canada
and in, the USA there are 60, In Sydney it's 65, in ,Korea
it is 22 and in ,China
it is 15. In sports highest is Sydney with 30 and the lowest is Korea
with 21, in Canada
it is 22, then
the US with 23, and China
with 25. In reading Korea
and China
are 60 and France and England are 30, then
Canada
and Sydney are 15 and US, and Japan is 62. In hobbies China
is 50 after that Australia and Korea
are equal to 45, then
the USA is 42, after that Canada
is 40, England is 21 and Paris is 20. In music the US is 23, then
Australia is 5, then
Paris and England are equal to 4, Canada
is 3 and Korea
is 2. On Beach Goldcoast and the USA are equal is 30, Korea
is 2 and China
is 5. In sleep Paris is 20, China
is 5, Australia and Korea
is 4, and Canada
and US are 2.
In conclusion, in the table are 7 countries and 7 activities. And age group is from 30-50.Submitted by purvametaliya99 on
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