Write a letter to your boss apologising for the recent meeting you missed at work. Apologise for missing the meeting. Explain what happened. Say what you will do to compensate.
Dear Sir,
I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am writing this
letter to apologise for the meeting that I missed on June 22nd about the marketing strategy.
I am deeply sorry for not attending the last
meeting due to
pressing
family issue. Correct article usage
a pressing
Although
it is a crucial meeting for the company, I could not participate.
Allow me to elaborate about
the situation. Change preposition
on
Firstly
, my father has been hospitalized due to
his
heart complications, with all my family members heavily occupied with work. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Furthermore
, as an elder son
I have taken the responsibility of caring for my father until they return. Add a comma
son,
Therefore
, this
leaves me no choice but has
to prioritize accompanying my father during his critical time.
As for the materials, I have already written down the meeting Unnecessary verb
apply
result
from other colleagues and my partner in my department regarding the strategy that has been discussed. Fix the agreement mistake
results
Additionally
, I will go over all development plans and will ensure you that such
things will not occur again in the future.
I hope you will forgive my absence.
Yours faithfully,
JunSubmitted by wilztan6700 on
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Task Response
To improve task response, make sure to directly address the compensation for missing the meeting and the assurance that it will not happen again in the future.
Coherence and Cohesion
To improve coherence and cohesion, consider organizing the information more clearly by separating each idea into distinct paragraphs and using transition words to connect ideas more smoothly.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite