More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people suggest that the solution to this problem is to increase the price of fattening foods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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People
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think that they are becoming fat for many reasons. One of the ways to solve the problem is to raise the price of unhealthy
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. In my perspective, I agree with
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sentence for the reasons specifies below. There are many reasons for
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to become fat.
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, many
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do not focus on their
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and eat unhealthy
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which causes fat.
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,
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are not doing enough exercise which affects their health, some of them say that they do not have money to enter a gym they can walk around their neighbourhood or at a park.
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,
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should sleep early and wake up early in the morning.
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,
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think that healthy
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is more expensive than unhealthy
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so, that why
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are being fat. There are several solutions for fatness.
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as the government should subsidize healthy
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and make it cheaper.
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,
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think that the government should tax unhealthy
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and make it expensive. If they do not lower the prices for healthy
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people
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will not buy them. If
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want to be healthy and have a healthy body they must do exercises daily.
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, more
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will fall into fatness.
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,
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should have a diet and they
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should follow it. In conclusion, the public is getting fat because they eat unhealthy
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instead
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eating healthy
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. I recommend that
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should focus on their diet and eat healthy
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.
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,
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should do daily exercises.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • obesity
  • overweight
  • fattening foods
  • calorie-dense
  • healthier food choices
  • taxation
  • economic implications
  • social implications
  • subsidies
  • nutritional education
  • public health campaigns
  • nanny state
  • individual's right
  • consumer behavior
  • preventative measures
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