one of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages?
Thanks to medicine our life expectancy, in
the
developed countries, is longer than in the past. I partially agree with the idea that Correct article usage
apply
this
new reality brings with it more benefits than drawbacks.
There are few
important reasons to agree with Correct article usage
a few
this
idea. First of all, due to
the development of medicine, your quality life
can really increase because there are many simple possibilities to deal with different diseases. Change preposition
of life
For example
, in the past, if you had high fiver
or pneumonia you could not be certain to survive, but today the scenario is different and you can recover quickly from these illnesses. Correct your spelling
fever
In addition
, you have the possibility to enjoy your retirement. Maybe we do not think about it, as we spend most of our lives working. Consequently
, it is essential to have time for ourselves doing
the activities we love.
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to do
In
the other hand, the costs of healthcare have grown. Change preposition
On
For
this
reason, some governments, like Switzerland, must ask to
their populations to pay more for medical care. Remove the preposition
apply
For instance
, this
situation in my country is putting under pression
a lot of families since they do not have a well-paid Correct your spelling
pressure
job
. Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
Furthermore
, the
healthcare insurance is mandatory, so you do not have any chance to cope with it. Correct article usage
apply
In other words
, you solve one problem and create another at the same time.
In conclusion, I believe that the
medicine is giving us many possibilities to enjoy more our lives, but governments should find a solution to avoid Correct article usage
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that other people
suffering from Change the determiner
that other person
those other people
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