Students should spend more time to working before begining University studies . To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

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working

is

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necessary before starting

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college studies . Personally,

i

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definitely agree with the statement above and the reason why

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will show in the paragraph below. It is vital to understand that working before

spend

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time

to

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study

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many benefits

such

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more experience

lessons

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or many useful skills to apply

for

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social life .

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that , it contains many elements to be a mature person more than

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others . After

finish

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the job before starting the

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, it will be comfortable and easy

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concentrate on

study

. In fact , it can be seen that if who spend

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working first

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can handle situations easier than the person who

start

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study

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first. The next point is pupils are too young , they completely improvisation and they need to

working

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for

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achieve more experiences and learned

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or some kind of soft skills . Another key component of the case for undergraduate

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time

in working

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totally right . In England ,

scholar

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concentration

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with

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finding

occupation

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, they consumed many hours or many days for observed

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jobs . The percentage of unemployment in Wales was very truncated because the

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of workers

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major students from high school to college first-years .

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, many opinions suppose that

,

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person

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who

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undergraduate

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should spend

time

for

study

not

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working . If

trainee

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invest

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almost in

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, they will not achieve any involvement in social life . In

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conclusion , it

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to say that the pupils should consume

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in exertion than

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without any experiences for usual life . It can really help in many situations and many

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.

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time

ago , Vietnamese people often said

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: " Practice forever to be talented, diligently all good."