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It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

#year #school #university
Nowadays, having a
year
 gap between
end
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 of the high
school
 level and starting
university
 has sharply become popular.
Also
, there are some advantages like becoming more relaxed,
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 out more than before with friends and spending more
time
 with family members.
Moreover
, it has many negative points too,
Such
 as ,adaption to doing nothing, being lazy and senseless about studying and forgetting
your
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 past
knwoledge
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knowledge
 that you learned in high
school
. In my opinion,
disadvantages
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 of
this
 decision
is
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 more than
it
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its
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 profits. The most important benefit is being relaxed after high
school
. When you have enough
time
 to enjoy
after
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yourself after
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your
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high
school
, you may be more pleased. when you become calmer it has a result to be more practical than when you were in anxiety.
For example
, one of my friends had a
year
 gap before
university
. she became stressless and she had enough
time
 and,
as a result
, applied for a high-level major in America.
Therefore
, the most
importand
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important
 benefit becoming more peaceful.
Moreover
, the most important drawback is adapting to do nothing in one
year
 that you do not have any study before
university
. The reason is when
in
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 a period of
time
 you get used to
do
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 something
that is
 enjoyable.
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Therefore
, you cannot be good after one
year
 of doing nothing.
For instance
, my cousin was not accepted
in
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university
 for the first
time
 and she had to have a
year
 gap.
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Additionally
, she became lazy, so she could not start her
university
.
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, the most important bad point is getting used to
dpoing
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doing
 nothing. To
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sum up
, having a
year
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 rest before
accademic
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academic
 study
in
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at
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university
 now has become
significently intresting
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significantly interesting
. As I mentioned earlier, it has
possitive
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positive
 effects like being more
relax
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,
having
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and having
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 enough
time
 to spend with friends and family and negative effects like
,
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 doing nothing as a habit, becoming sluggish and forgetting some lessons that you learned in
school
 so
becoause
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because
 most
of
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people
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the people
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 cannot
contorol
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control
 their free
time
 and they mostly
loose
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 their chance of gaining
achivement
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achievement
achievements
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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