It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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Nowadays, having a
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gap between
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of the high
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level and starting
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has sharply become popular.
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, there are some advantages like becoming more relaxed,
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out more than before with friends and spending more
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with family members.
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, it has many negative points too,
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as ,adaption to doing nothing, being lazy and senseless about studying and forgetting
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knowledge
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. In my opinion,
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more than
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profits. The most important benefit is being relaxed after high
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. When you have enough
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to enjoy
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high
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, you may be more pleased. when you become calmer it has a result to be more practical than when you were in anxiety.
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, one of my friends had a
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gap before
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. she became stressless and she had enough
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and,
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, applied for a high-level major in America.
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, the most
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benefit becoming more peaceful.
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, the most important drawback is adapting to do nothing in one
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that you do not have any study before
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. The reason is when
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a period of
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you get used to
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something
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enjoyable.
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of doing nothing.
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, my cousin was not accepted
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university
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for the first
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and she had to have a
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gap.
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, she became lazy, so she could not start her
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.
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, the most important bad point is getting used to
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doing
nothing. To
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, having a
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year
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rest before
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academic
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university
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now has become
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significantly interesting
. As I mentioned earlier, it has
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positive
effects like being more
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,
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and having
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enough
time
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to spend with friends and family and negative effects like
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doing nothing as a habit, becoming sluggish and forgetting some lessons that you learned in
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so
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because
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people
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the people
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cannot
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control
their free
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and they mostly
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their chance of gaining
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achievement
achievements
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gap year
  • work experience
  • internships
  • traveling
  • life experiences
  • personal development
  • independent
  • self-reliant
  • educational progress
  • graduation timeline
  • financial burden
  • academic momentum
  • structured academic environment
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