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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicle will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehickes outweigh the disadvantages.

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Nowadays, self-driving vehicles become a trend in the transportation industry. People have different views about the future impact of driverless
cars
.
While
 there are some drawbacks I believe that it may be a blessing rather than a curse. Of course, there are some disadvantages, but these are comparatively minority. On the one hand, automatic
cars
 are leads to privacy and security concerns. In order to let computers move our
cars
. We have to upload our personal data and identification
while
 being tracked by
GPS
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 system and provide our schedule and destination.
Furthermore
, the growing popularity of automated vehicles might result in the disappearance of certain occupations.
For example
, taxi drivers will lose their jobs, since the artificial intelligence will drive for the public.
On the other hand
, the number of car accidents would decrease since there is
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vast majority of the accidents were caused by human errors,
such
 as lack of concentration, drunk driving and misjudgment. Accidents will be reduced, thereby saving millions of human lives.
Moreover
, there are lots of people who cannot move with freedom because they are too old to drive or suffer from paralyzing and colour blindness. They can now sit in the driver’s seat, enjoying the freedom of movement, and no longer need to rely on others.
In other words
, these kinds of vehicles get rid of discrimination and reach the goal of equality.
Overall
, the advantages of driverless
cars
 outweigh the disadvantages.
Although
 there are a few negatives, the fact that so many lives would save make
this
 future comparatively bright.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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