The chart illustrates estimated maximum population of Asian elephants between 1997 and 2004

The chart illustrates estimated maximum population of Asian elephants between 1997 and 2004
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The graph chart provides information on the estimation of Asian
elephants
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' greatest population over a seven-year period in different countries.
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, in 2004, the number of Asian
elephants
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experienced a downward trend, especially in India, Malaysia and Thailand where they decreased significantly.
According to
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the graph,
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India had the most
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both in 1997 and 2004, these numbers dropped sharply from just under 10,000 to around 7,500.
Similarly
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, Thailand and Malaysia
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displayed precipitous downturns, dipping approximately 2,000
elephants
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between 1997 and 2004. Meanwhile, other countries
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as Vietnam, Sri Lanka, Myanmar and China, illustrated a gentle fall of less than 1,000
elephants
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over the 20-year period. Meanwhile, Laos was the only nation that remained stable, hovering just over 1,000
elephants
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in those two time periods (1997 and 2004).
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to the remaining nations, Cambodia was the only one that had a surge of
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, gradually peaking at approximately 1,500.
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