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The average prices per kilometre of clothing imported into the European Union from six different countries in 1993 and 2003 are shown in the bar chart below.

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The column graph compares the import prices of per kilometre clothing by the European Union from six different countries in 1993 with that of 2003.
Overall
, the
EU
 paid the highest amount to Argentina for garments import and
lowest
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 to Bangladesh in both
years
. As is seen, the European Union paid around 28
pounds
for
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per kilometre
clothes
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 from Argentina in 1993 and
this
 rate was
highest
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. After ten
years
, it reduced to just over 25
pounds
 but still, Argentina received the premier
price
 for clothing export to the
EU
. The second most value paid by the
EU
 for cloth importing from Brazil and both in 1993 and 2003 they were paid roughly 23
pounds
 for the one-kilometre dress. Japan received exactly 15
pounds
 for that in 1993 but
this
 rate dropped to roughly 13
pounds
 after 10
years
. China was paid 10
pounds
 for each kilo costume the
EU
 exported in 1993 and the
price
 hiked to about 17
pounds
 in just ten
years
. The
EU
 purchased Indian garments items for approximately 7
pounds
 a kilo in 1993 and the
price
 doubled in a decade. The least amount
for
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per kilo
clothing
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of clothing
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 was paid to Bangladesh by the
EU
 in both of the
years
 but the
price
 went high in 2003 and was 6
pounds
 compared to half of that in a decade earlier.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

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  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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