The presented pie chart illustrates the household spending of Japanese and Malaysian in 2010.

The pie chart depicts the household spending of Japanese and Malaysia in diverse

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,housing and transport and food,

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health

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health

care and other goods and services,

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The presented pie chart illustrates the household spending of Japanese and Malaysian in 2010.

3.With the rise of e-book come the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages for this trend?

Children are facing more pressure nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of this pressure and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

Many customs and traditional ways of behavior are no longer relevant to modern life and not worth keeping. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Some believe that thge development of technology and improved software allow us to translate between languages automatically . Therefore , it is not necessary to learn a foreign language any more . Do you agree or disagree?