The presented pie chart illustrates the household spending of Japanese and Malaysian in 2010.

The presented pie chart illustrates the household spending of Japanese and Malaysian in 2010.
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The pie chart depicts the household spending of Japanese and Malaysia in diverse
tearms
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teams
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,housing and transport and food,
also
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health
heahth
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health
care and other goods and services,
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