You and your family are moving to another country for work, and you are looking to buy a house there. Write a letter to a property agent. In your letter: Introduce yourself and your family Describe the type of accommodation that you hope to find Give your preference for the location of the accommodation Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: To Whom it May Concern,

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Dear Sir/Madam, To whom it may concern, My name is Prabhjot Singh and I am looking for a house in your area. I am moving to Coventry with my family. My family consists of three members me and my parents. I have got a job as a care worker at a company in the west midlands. We will arrive there on the 1st of next month. I came across your website

while

searching for accommodation online. As I am moving with my parents I want a house with two bedrooms and at least one room with a joint bathroom, a kitchen and a hall.

However

, if the house would be located somewhere near Enn Healthcare Ltd. That would be more convenient to go to my work. Please provide me with the information about public transport near the accommodation ty that you can offer and how far is it from the market or shipping area. More information and my Legal documents are available in the attached file. I will be looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Prabhjot Singh.

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