International travel brings benefits to travellers and the countries visited, but it also harms for the environment. Do the disadvantages outweigh the advantages?
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travel
brings upsides to travellers
and the nations visited, but it also
adverse for Add a missing verb
is also
ecosystem
. Add an article
the ecosystem
Although
International travel
have
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has
negative
impact on Add an article
a negative
environment
I believe Add an article
the environment
merits
of International Correct article usage
the merits
travel
exceed demerits
because it can help Correct article usage
the demerits
travellers
to experience a new culture and enhance tourism
Add an article
the tourism
industry
.
On the one hand, the primary drawback of International travel
is create
environmental Wrong verb form
creating
issue
namely, Fix the agreement mistake
issues
air
pollution. To illustrate, most of
International Change preposition
apply
travel
done
by Add a missing verb
is done
airplanes
, which mean Change the spelling
aeroplanes
airplane
release Co2 emissions Change the spelling
aeroplane
to
the atmosphere. Change preposition
into
Therefore
, more Co2 footprint
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footprints
in
earth Change preposition
on
create
Change the verb form
creates
air
contamination, which this
can Correct pronoun usage
apply
can
harmfulRemove the redundancy
apply
influnece
on Correct your spelling
influence
people
health. Change noun form
people's
This
is becaue
Correct your spelling
because
air
pollution lead to seriou
diseases Correct your spelling
serious
such
as,
cancer, high blood pressure, and heart attack. Remove the comma
apply
Furthermore
, air
contamination is the main cause of climate change and global warming.
On the other hand
, I would like to argue benefits
of International Correct article usage
the benefits
travel
significantly
more than Add a missing verb
are significantly
downsides
. The first benefitCorrect article usage
the downsides
, International
Add a missing verb
is, International
travel
can help travellers
to experience a
new cultures and customs. Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
This
is because travellers
often visit museume
and art Correct your spelling
museums
gallary
to learn about Correct your spelling
gallery
heritage
of Add an article
the heritage
country
. Add an article
the country
Moreover
, travellers
can make relationships with local people, which this
can reduce cultural Correct pronoun usage
apply
difference
among nations. The second advantage of International Fix the agreement mistake
differences
travel
is can boosts
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boost
Correct article usage
the trouism
trouism
Correct your spelling
tourism
industry
on
countries. To illustrate, many tourists will spend money on Change preposition
in
country
namely, hotels, public Correct article usage
the country
transprot
, and attraction places, which Correct your spelling
transport
these money
can contribute to Change the determiner
this money
economy
of Add an article
the economy
local
country. Add an article
the local
Additionally
, tourism
Add an article
the tourism
industry
can generate employment opportunities for local inhabitants, For example
, many local inhabitants will work as, tour guided
, waiters Wrong verb form
guides
on
hotels, and drivers on buses.
Change preposition
in
To sum up
, Although
International travel
have
Change the verb form
has
the
detrimental consequence on Correct article usage
apply
ecosystem
I thinkCorrect article usage
the ecosystem
Correct article usage
the
travel
greater outweigh drawbacks
because it can help Correct article usage
the drawbacks
travellers
to experience a new culture and boosts tourism
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the tourism
industry
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