You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter,  describe the situation  explain your problems and why it is difficult to work  say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

Dear Sir, I hope

this

letter finds you well. I am writing

this

letter to express my difficulties regarding the

roommate

arrangement for my accommodation. Currently, I am a third-year majoring in Industrial engineering and live in

college

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a college

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dorm on the 5th

floors

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floor

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with a

roommate

from

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the arts

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arts

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department. I just moved to

this

college dorm because it's closest to the campus and offers many facilities. Unfortunately, there are several problems with my

roommate

. Allow me to elaborate on the

situations

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.

Firstly

, my

roommate

always brings his friends over to the dorm every weekend, which was really annoying because I could not enjoy my rest time.

Furthermore

, my final thesis is approaching and I could not focus

due to

his

habits

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habit

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that always like to

turned

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turn

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on loud music.

As a result

,

this

really

affect

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my concentration. I would like to live in a room by myself with quiet and

peace

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peaceful

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condition

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.

Moreover

, I prefer to live on the first floor because it's more convenient and the lift always broke down.

Therefore

, I

am greatly appreciate

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greatly appreciate

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if

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it if

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you can grant my request. Thank you for considering my request and looking forward

for

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to

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your reply. Yours sincerely, Jun