The graph below shows the average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal.

The graph below shows the average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal.
The line graph illustrates average carbon dioxide (CO2)
emissions
per
head
in the United Kingdom (UK),
Sweden
, Italy and Portugal from 1967 to 2007.
Overall
, the carbon dioxide
emission
of Italy and Portugal showed a similar and significant
increase
over the period,
while
CO2
emissions
in the UK gradually decreased, but not decreased in the other three countries
at the end
of the time period.
However
,
Sweden
showed a sharp
increase
in the first decade and
then
experienced a downward trend. In 1967, CO2
emissions
in Italy and Portugal per person were almost 1.6 and 4.1 metric
tonnes
respectively.
Then
, Italy's CO2
emission
alternately
increase
until 1997 and was steady between 1997-2007 at 7.8 metric
tonnes
per
head
. Portugal's CO2
emission
increased gradually and end of the time period, it showed 5.7 metric
tonnes
per
head
. In early 1967, CO2
emissions
in the UK were nearly 11 metric
tonnes
per
head
. In the meantime, declined the CO2
emission
little by little and stayed at nearly 9 metric
tonnes
in 2007 which was the highest amount among the order three countries.
Sweden
started from 8.4 and
increase
gradually to 10.2 metric
tonnes
between 1967-1977. After that, dramatically reduced to 5.9 metric
tonnes
in 200 it was the highest value of Portugal and the lowest value of
Sweden
in 2007.
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