The graph below shows the average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal.

The graph below shows the average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal.
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The line graph illustrates average carbon dioxide (CO2)
emissions
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per
head
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in the United Kingdom (UK),
Sweden
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, Italy and Portugal from 1967 to 2007.
Overall
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, the carbon dioxide
emission
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of Italy and Portugal showed a similar and significant
increase
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over the period,
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CO2
emissions
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in the UK gradually decreased, but not decreased in the other three countries
at the end
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of the time period.
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,
Sweden
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showed a sharp
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in the first decade and
then
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experienced a downward trend. In 1967, CO2
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in Italy and Portugal per person were almost 1.6 and 4.1 metric
tonnes
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respectively.
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, Italy's CO2
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alternately
increase
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until 1997 and was steady between 1997-2007 at 7.8 metric
tonnes
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per
head
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. Portugal's CO2
emission
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increased gradually and end of the time period, it showed 5.7 metric
tonnes
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per
head
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. In early 1967, CO2
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in the UK were nearly 11 metric
tonnes
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per
head
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. In the meantime, declined the CO2
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little by little and stayed at nearly 9 metric
tonnes
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in 2007 which was the highest amount among the order three countries.
Sweden
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started from 8.4 and
increase
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gradually to 10.2 metric
tonnes
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between 1967-1977. After that, dramatically reduced to 5.9 metric
tonnes
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in 200 it was the highest value of Portugal and the lowest value of
Sweden
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in 2007.
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