The diagram below illustrates how a simple water filter is constructed and how it functions to produce clean drinking water. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

The diagram below illustrates how a simple water filter is constructed and how it functions to produce clean drinking water. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
The provided graph gives information about the process of filtering
water
in order to produce clean drinking
water
by using a
Water
-Filter Assembly.
Overall
, it can be seen that before unclean
water
can become drinkable it needs to be tipped into a
plastic
barrel, which contains layers of soil, charcoal, and gravel in order to store the now clean
water
in a drum. The first stage of producing clean drinking
water
involves unclean
water
and a
plastic
barrel.
To begin
with, the
plastic
lid which covers the
plastic
barrels need to be open
then
the dirty
water
can be poured into the filter tank.
Furthermore
, the liquid will go through the first sand layer and next to the layer of charcoal which will be followed by the layer of gravel. During
this
procedure, the unclean aqua will lose the dirt step by step.
Finally
, the cleaned
water
can be transported through a thin pipe into the storage drums, where the cleaned
water
will be collected and ready to be consumed.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, plastic with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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