The diagram below illustrates how a simple water filter is constructed and how it functions to produce clean drinking water. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

The diagram below illustrates how a simple water filter is constructed and how it functions to produce clean drinking water. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The provided graph gives information about the process of filtering
water
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in order to produce clean drinking
water
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by using a
Water
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-Filter Assembly.
Overall
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, it can be seen that before unclean
water
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can become drinkable it needs to be tipped into a
plastic
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barrel, which contains layers of soil, charcoal, and gravel in order to store the now clean
water
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in a drum. The first stage of producing clean drinking
water
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involves unclean
water
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and a
plastic
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barrel.
To begin
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with, the
plastic
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lid which covers the
plastic
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barrels need to be open
then
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the dirty
water
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can be poured into the filter tank.
Furthermore
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, the liquid will go through the first sand layer and next to the layer of charcoal which will be followed by the layer of gravel. During
this
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procedure, the unclean aqua will lose the dirt step by step.
Finally
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, the cleaned
water
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can be transported through a thin pipe into the storage drums, where the cleaned
water
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will be collected and ready to be consumed.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, plastic with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Permeable
  • Filtration
  • Percolate
  • Impurities
  • Debris
  • Adsorbent
  • Charcoal
  • Gravel
  • Pollutants
  • Consumption
  • Potable
  • Percolation
  • Layered structure
  • Filtrate
  • Gravity-fed system
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