The diagram below illustrates how a simple water filter is constructed and how it functions to produce clean drinking water. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
The provided graph gives information about the process of filtering
water
in order to produce clean drinking Use synonyms
water
by using a Use synonyms
Water
-Filter Assembly.
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Overall
, it can be seen that before unclean Linking Words
water
can become drinkable it needs to be tipped into a Use synonyms
plastic
barrel, which contains layers of soil, charcoal, and gravel in order to store the now clean Use synonyms
water
in a drum.
The first stage of producing clean drinking Use synonyms
water
involves unclean Use synonyms
water
and a Use synonyms
plastic
barrel. Use synonyms
To begin
with, the Linking Words
plastic
lid which covers the Use synonyms
plastic
barrels need to be open Use synonyms
then
the dirty Linking Words
water
can be poured into the filter tank. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the liquid will go through the first sand layer and next to the layer of charcoal which will be followed by the layer of gravel. During Linking Words
this
procedure, the unclean aqua will lose the dirt step by step. Linking Words
Finally
, the cleaned Linking Words
water
can be transported through a thin pipe into the storage drums, where the cleaned Use synonyms
water
will be collected and ready to be consumed.Use synonyms
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, plastic with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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