The diagram below illustrates how a simple water filter is constructed and how it functions to produce clean drinking water. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
The provided graph gives information about the process of filtering
water
in order to produce clean drinking water
by using a Water
-Filter Assembly.
Overall
, it can be seen that before unclean water
can become drinkable it needs to be tipped into a plastic
barrel, which contains layers of soil, charcoal, and gravel in order to store the now clean water
in a drum.
The first stage of producing clean drinking water
involves unclean water
and a plastic
barrel. To begin
with, the plastic
lid which covers the plastic
barrels need to be open then
the dirty water
can be poured into the filter tank. Furthermore
, the liquid will go through the first sand layer and next to the layer of charcoal which will be followed by the layer of gravel. During this
procedure, the unclean aqua will lose the dirt step by step. Finally
, the cleaned water
can be transported through a thin pipe into the storage drums, where the cleaned water
will be collected and ready to be consumed.Submitted by amal.allouch on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, plastic with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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