Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. to what extent do you agree with this view?

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It is commonly believed that
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of investing huge amounts of money in the arts like music, and theatre the
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should prioritize public services. In my opinion, I agree that the
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should spend money on building hospitals, schools, and roads,
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, that doesn'
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mean investment in
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is useless. One of the major concerns these days is the rise of the population in most countries.
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, the
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should use the budget for public services like healthcare centres, educational institutes, constructing roads, and providing public transport.
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, countries like India which has a huge population will
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have a greater count of people who are below the poverty line, so the
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can support them by building hospitals and providing free treatment, and giving scholarships to poor students so that they can achieve their goals and improve their quality of living and it will so improve countries economy in later years.
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, the
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neglect the arts
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as music, and theatre, which are basic forms of entertainment for the public.
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institutes don'
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make much profit, because of the high prices of equipment, raw materials and maintenance of auditoriums for theatre.
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with
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,funding they can maintain their institutes.
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, a few children might have a talent for singing, painting, and acting, but
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not having any solid platforms to present their skills to the world and not having the financial support to develop their talent they couldn'
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pursue their dreams.
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, conducting
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competitions and
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galleries will be helpful to them. In conclusion,Allocating a significant portion of the budget to improve citizens' health and education will contribute to the country's future growth, but aiding arts can give life to a section of the community.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enriching society
  • promoting cultural understanding
  • development of talent
  • creative industries
  • economic benefits
  • generate revenue
  • cultural heritage
  • identity
  • prioritize spending
  • needs of the majority
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