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Some people thinks that wastes from home enough not recycled.They think government should make it legal requirement.To what extent do you agree with the statement?

#people #wastes #home #government #requirement
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 there is a consensus that people did not consider their waste to be recycled۔ It is a contentious issue whether the government should make a proper
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 against
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 attitude or vice versa. My view coincides with the former proposition for a number of reasons. There is a myriad of reasons why goods like plastic bags and glass items should be recycled. On the one hand,
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 that can be reused could help to reduce the increasing number of
trash
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 that may cause various diseases like skin allergies.
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, the
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 regarding reform of the used thing makes an essential part of everyone's life. There is no doubt that all of these merits will hold waste items in good stead, as far as people are concerned. An example of
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 scenario can be seen in developed countries, they used
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 bins of different colours which refers to their purpose like glass items should be put in blue same as others. Admittedly, It is true that imposing the
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 regarding waste products is essential but the government should create awareness about the consequences of
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 by using billboards, campaigns etc.
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 would help to enhance self-discipline in public and one cannot dismiss the telling benefit associated with
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.
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, the advantages appear to be insignificant against the deluge benefit of public generic interest in
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 offers.
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, I would not wish to underestimate the merits related without imposing
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 people should be involved in recycling
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.
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, I feel that the role of having a
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 against recycling
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 is instrumental in both terms of cleaning the environment
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 the sense of using
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 in different ways.
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