In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

There is a suggestion that youngsters who are preparing for their

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should take a gap

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to do some work or go someplace. In my opinion, the disadvantages of

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phenomenon far outweigh the advantages in equal measure. The first drawback of

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trend is that

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who spend one

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on other activities are wasting their valuable duration.

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means that the

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when they’re preparing for their

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is the best

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and the most suitable

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for them to concentrate on their study, if they leaf their studies, even just a

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, it would be hard to come back to their study. A

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argument is that they would not graduate on

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if they took a gap

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leading to following their peers, who are the same age. Despite the negatives mentioned above, it seems to me that spending a

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doing something else is a negative development.

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, these

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could undergo some part-

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jobs or visit some scenery places to enhance their social knowledge and open their minds.

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, if they applied for

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instantly, they would not have an opportunity to connect with the outside environment, leading to a lack of social knowledge.

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, some

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who are from lower-income families have to effort to earn money in order to cover the tuition fee. In many

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institutions, the high teaching quality and modern facilities always required high tuition,

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, to gain an education with better quality, they have to work before becoming the first

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student. In conclusion,

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should make a decision to decide whether to take a gap

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or continue to apply for college activities that rely on their situation.