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Some people think that the best way to improve safety is by reducing the maximum speed limits on vehicles others think there are other better ways. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

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The
debeat
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debate
 on what
rules
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 to implement on the traffic control is always talk of the town.Many people
suggests
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on
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limiting the speed
while
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 other have
different
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a different
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 belief.The essay shall discuss both
the
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sides in detail .
To begin
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 with, there are some people who
suggests
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 that,there should be a speed control measure on the vehicle for the protection of the society.As it has always
noticed
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 people are in
hurry
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a hurry
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 and to reach on time they tend to without
limit
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.
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a
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if a
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person is late for his important meeting he is bound to
be ride
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 his car fast and that may lead to any mishap. Even , there are
younsters
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youngsters
 or speed lover who drives with
over speeding
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overspeeding
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limit
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 which is
life threating
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. Alternately , others believe vice-versa stating ,
instead
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 of controlling the speed
limit
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 there
has
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 to be
rules
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 on the
drive
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driving
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 pattern near the school or residential area and there should be
penalty
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a penalty
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 if the person doesn't obey the
rules
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.
Also
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 ,
the
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 road signs can be placed with the speed
limit
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 near the roads where there can be more traffic.To
this
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 , even
over taking
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overtaking
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 the other vehicle should be illegal as it is not safe. To
sub-stantiate
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substantiate
; it has
seen
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been seen
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 that many times
due to
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over taking
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overtaking
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 the vehicle always the driver loses
its
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control and meets with an accident. To sum it up , I strongly believe that one should drive
with
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at
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the
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a
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 speed
that is
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 not harmful to
the
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society and the
rules
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 of driving must be followed which
in
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results
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result
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lead
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leads
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 to a safe and healthy society
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