The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2003-2012.
This
chart provides information about the number
of incidents of three different crimes, burglary, car
theft
and robbery has changed from 2003 to 2012.
Overall
, the number
of burglaries has changed rapidly from 2003 to 2012 while
the changes in car
theft
and robbery are not that much considerable.
As can be seen in the chart in detail, the figure for burglaries reached the highest number
in 2004 at nearly over 3500, followed by car
theft
's sum which was just about 2800. However
, the
burglary's Correct article usage
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number
has
doubled to almost under 1500, in 2012, Unnecessary verb
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while
the number
of car
theft's
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thefts
number
was not that much changed and decreased, it was around nearly 2500.
The total of robberies from 2003 to 2012 was not that much changed. It just figured out between 500 and 1000, then
it declined between 2005 to 2008 and increased between 2008 and 2010.Submitted by ehlight22 on
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