The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2003-2012.

The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2003-2012.
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This
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chart provides information about the
number
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of incidents of three different crimes, burglary,
car
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theft
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and robbery has changed from 2003 to 2012.
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, the
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of burglaries has changed rapidly from 2003 to 2012
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the changes in
car
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theft
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and robbery are not that much considerable. As can be seen in the chart in detail, the figure for burglaries reached the highest
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in 2004 at nearly over 3500, followed by
car
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theft
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's sum which was just about 2800.
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burglary's
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has
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doubled to almost under 1500, in 2012,
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the
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of
car
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theft's
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thefts
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number
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was not that much changed and decreased, it was around nearly 2500. The total of robberies from 2003 to 2012 was not that much changed. It just figured out between 500 and 1000,
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it declined between 2005 to 2008 and increased between 2008 and 2010.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, car, theft with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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