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Band 7

The maps illustrate an industrial area in Norbiton in the present day compared with plans for future development of the site.

The maps illustrate an industrial area in Norbiton in the present day compared with plans for future development of the site.
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The given map compares a particular industrial
area
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 in Norbiton town with the future development plan. Generally speaking, the industrial
area
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 will be taken over by the residential
area
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 and a number of facilities will be built in the town. In detail, in the present date, there are vast factories located beside the road and the roundabout in the centre of the town.
According to
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 planned future development, the factories will be replaced by houses and shops.
In addition
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, they
also
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 have a plan to extend the road to enlarge the residence
area
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 to the left of the roundabout and across the river
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, to provide convenience to residents, they have a plan to build numerous amenities in the
area
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. A school will be built on the right of the map, and a playground below the river. A medical centre will be located on the right of the roundabout.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
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