Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is by reducing the maximum speed limits on vehicles others think there are other better ways . Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

some individuals argue that the best way to guarantee the security of

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is the legislation of some regulation to

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people's speed on the way.

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, others believe that there are other solutions for

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, I agree with the latter view. On the one hand, proponents argue that many accidents are

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a result of illegal speeds. People when they are in a rush go

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than the allowed velocity and that would cause some irrecoverable damage to their life and even lead to death.

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, surveys in my country have shown that the proportion of accidents caused by individual death is the prominent reason for mortality.

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, that would not only cause damages to the person who went at unlimited speed

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in many cases other innocent people may be affected by

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calamity.

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, Opponents believe that it is not the only reason for insecurities on

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and other defects

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as the quality of highways may be effective. the way that the government designs

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would determine the safety of drivers.

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, the number of lights that

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used and the quality of asphalts are 2 important measures that must be taken

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in order to achieve better travel

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, planning for wider

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with extra lines for emergency usage is

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eminent implement that should be paid attention to especially in bustle cities.

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, I reiterate that focusing on

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speed solely is an unwise decision because there are other efficient measures

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safety and with the combination of these factors we can donate

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to citizens.