Most people accept that we now live in a globalized world but not everyone agrees that this is beneficial. To what extent is globalisation a positive or a negative development?
Many people these days believe that we are currently living in a globalized world but not all of them accept that
this
is useful. I personally believe that globalization
has its pros and cons. One
of the biggest advantages of globalization
is the development of the service sectors which is accessible to majority of the people today. On the other hand
, of the many,one
of the biggest downside
of Change to a plural noun
downsides
globalization
is the
global warming.
The upsides that have been brought about by Correct article usage
apply
globalization
are many, but the one
that has proven to be the most beneficial to humans is the development of the service sectors like Medical services, Information and Technology services, Transportation services and many more. For example
, it has never been easier until today to send messages in times of emergencies at such
a fast rate through multiple platforms like whatsapp
, Correct your spelling
WhatsApp
facebook
and Capitalize word
Facebook
other
social platforms. Fix the agreement mistake
others
In addition
, it has never been easy until today to get yourself treated with health care at such
a fast rate and most important of all it has become very easy to access any given location at any given point of time through various modes of transport. These are some of the perks of globalization
.
On the other hand
, out of the many disadvantages of globalization
, one
of the biggest cons is Global warming. With the rise in industrialization and increasing pollution it has led to an overall
increase in the average temperature of the earths
atmosphere and irregular climatic conditions. Change noun form
earth's
For instance
, in my city, the amount of rainfall we have received in the last
few years has kept increasing, and has led to several flashfloods, also
it rais
when it is least expected, Correct your spelling
rains
such
climate has never been seen ever before in my city. This
is one
of the most unpleasent
things Correct your spelling
unpleasant
of
Change preposition
about
globalization
.
In conclusion, globalization
has led to advancement
of several industries that have helped mankind benefit tremendously from a century ago, Add an article
the advancement
however
with the side effects of these developments much credit cannot be given to globalization
. Therefore
, we can only talk about its merits and demerits altogeather
as it would not be fair to have a bias on either side.Correct your spelling
altogether
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