Most people accept that we now live in a globalized world but not everyone agrees that this is beneficial. To what extent is globalisation a positive or a negative development?

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Many people these days believe that we are currently living in a globalized world but not all of them accept that
this
is useful. I personally believe that
globalization
has its pros and cons.
One
of the biggest advantages of
globalization
is the development of the service sectors which is accessible to majority of the people today.
On the other hand
, of the many,
one
of the biggest
downside
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of
globalization
is
the
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global warming. The upsides that have been brought about by
globalization
are many, but the
one
that has proven to be the most beneficial to humans is the development of the service sectors like Medical services, Information and Technology services, Transportation services and many more.
For example
, it has never been easier until today to send messages in times of emergencies at
such
a fast rate through multiple platforms like
whatsapp
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WhatsApp
,
facebook
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and
other
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social platforms.
In addition
, it has never been easy until today to get yourself treated with health care at
such
a fast rate and most important of all it has become very easy to access any given location at any given point of time through various modes of transport. These are some of the perks of
globalization
.
On the other hand
, out of the many disadvantages of
globalization
,
one
of the biggest cons is Global warming. With the rise in industrialization and increasing pollution it has led to an
overall
increase in the average temperature of the
earths
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atmosphere and irregular climatic conditions.
For instance
, in my city, the amount of rainfall we have received in the
last
few years has kept increasing, and has led to several flashfloods,
also
it
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when it is least expected,
such
climate has never been seen ever before in my city.
This
is
one
of the most
unpleasent
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unpleasant
things
of
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globalization
. In conclusion,
globalization
has led to
advancement
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of several industries that have helped mankind benefit tremendously from a century ago,
however
with the side effects of these developments much credit cannot be given to
globalization
.
Therefore
, we can only talk about its merits and demerits
altogeather
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altogether
as it would not be fair to have a bias on either side.
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