The charts below give information about levels of education in Glasgow, a city in Scotland, in 2010.

The charts below give information about levels of education in Glasgow, a city in Scotland, in 2010.
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The following illustrations depict the level of education of the citizens of Scotland by
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and gender range in 2010. The chart has been divided into 5
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groups (16-24; 24-35; 35-50; 50-75; 75+).
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, the highest
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of
university
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degree
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had
people
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between the
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of 24-35. And the
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group with the least
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of
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with
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higher education is 75+ (only 25 per
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). In both gender
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the least
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of
people
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had a
university
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degree
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(29 per
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of females and 32 per
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of males).
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, the majority of
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in Scotland did not have a
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degree
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or school certificate (38 per
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of women and 35 per
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of men). 71% of youngsters who were aged 16-24 got a
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degree
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and
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slightly improved in the next group of
people
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(24-35 years old).
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the
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steadily decreased to 71% (35-50 years old); 50% (50-75 years old); and 25% (
people
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aged 75+).
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the pie
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both genders had the same
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of
people
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with school
certificate
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certificates
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. But the
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of
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that do not have any qualifications is slightly less in females, rather than males. And the
number
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of males with a
university
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degree
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is 3% more than females.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, percentage, university, degree, people, number, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage distribution
  • educational levels
  • qualifications
  • higher education
  • school level qualifications
  • no qualifications
  • proportions
  • notable trends
  • outliers
  • age demographics
  • economic conditions
  • social policies
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