The charts below give information about levels of education in Glasgow, a city in Scotland, in 2010.

The following illustrations depict the level of education of the citizens of Scotland by

age

and gender range in 2010. The chart has been divided into 5

age

groups (16-24; 24-35; 35-50; 50-75; 75+).

Overall

, the highest

percentage

of

university

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had

people

between the

age

of 24-35. And the

age

group with the least

number

of

people

with

a

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higher education is 75+ (only 25 per

cent

). In both gender

groups

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the least

percentage

of

people

had a

university

degree

(29 per

cent

of females and 32 per

cent

of males).

However

, the majority of

people

in Scotland did not have a

university

degree

or school certificate (38 per

cent

of women and 35 per

cent

of men). 71% of youngsters who were aged 16-24 got a

university

degree

and

this

number

has

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slightly improved in the next group of

people

(24-35 years old).

After

this

slight

rise

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the

percentage

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steadily decreased to 71% (35-50 years old); 50% (50-75 years old); and 25% (

people

aged 75+).

According to

the pie

chart

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both genders had the same

percentage

of

people

with school

certificate

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certificates

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. But the

number

of

people

that do not have any qualifications is slightly less in females, rather than males. And the

number

of males with a

university

degree

is 3% more than females.