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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?
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It is true that
people
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 in some countries are more interested than ever to learn the history of their
house
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 or the place where they are living in. There may be some reasons that contribute to
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 situation, and I think there are several ways for
people
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 to know the background of the property. There are many reasons that prompt a person to find out about the history of their
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.
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, maybe they are superstitious,
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, in some Asian countries, there are taboos
of
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 living in a
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 where there were
people
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 who died inside the
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 for some other reasons than naturally deceased.
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,
people
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 may be curious to learn about the information because they want to know what did the previous
owners
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 do to the
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.
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, they are interested because if they want to sell their
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, they can tell the story of the
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 to the buyer and raise the price of the
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 if the story touches them. There are some actions that can be done to research
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 knowledge, one of them is to ask the previous
owners
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. Asking the prior property
owners
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 is the most direct way to find out what had happened to the
house
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 beforehand. The more
owners
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 you can ask the more knowledge you can get from them about
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house
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.
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, the
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 we lived in Taiwan was a 100-year-old building, we had some conversations with two old
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 and we learned that it was originally built by a landowner for his married son and his family to live in. In conclusion, there can be many factors that drive
people
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 to be wanting to know the past story of the
house
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 they are living in, and there are a variety of methods that can be adapted to learn
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 information.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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