The chart below shows information about the challenges people face when they go to live in other countries
The provided chart illustrates the percentage of foreigners in a particular country facing three distinct
challenges
upon immigration: making friends
, finding suitable accommodation, and learning the local language
. These challenges
are presented across three age groups.
In general, it is noticeable that younger individuals tend to struggle more with making friends
, while
they face fewer difficulties in learning the local language
when compared to older age groups. Conversely
, the older demographic displays contrasting trends in these aspects.
Looking at the age bracket of 18-34, a significant proportion (46%) of people encounter challenges
in making friends
upon relocating to a new country. Additionally
, 40% of this
group faces obstacles in finding appropriate accommodation, while
a smaller percentage (29%) has issues with learning the local language
. Among individuals aged 35 to 54, roughly equal percentages experience challenges
in all three areas. However
, among those aged 55 and over, the statistics take a different turn. A considerable majority (54%) of this
group struggles to learn the local language
, while
they find it relatively easy to make friends
(23%) and encounter fewer problems (22%) when searching for accommodationSubmitted by mhshid on
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