The maps below show an industrial area in town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site
The maps illustrate the development which will take place in the Norbiton industrial
area
in the future. Overall
, a comparison of the two maps reveals the transformation from a large industrial to a mainly convenient area
.
Currently, the Norbiton industrial area
is located on the east side
of the town and there is a roundabout that connects a southern and eastern road. Moreover
, there are many factories that are situated near the eastern road and roundabout. On the north side
of town, opposite side
of the river, there is farmland.
as shown in the future plan, all factories are demolished as a result
of the construction of many houses, a school in the east of the area
, and the playground beside the river. Furthermore
, medical centres and shops are built as well. additionally
, a new roundabout is erected on the south side
of the previous one. However
, only the river and roundabout will remain at the original site.Submitted by shokri.hananeh on
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