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Some people believe music plays an important role in society, while others think it is only a form of entertainment for individuals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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I was recently informed about a survey on
Music
's role in our society.
While
 some people quote that
Music
 is an
entertainment
 medium for society, there's a major class of community which think
otherwise
. In my personal view,
Music
 is much more than just an
entertainment
 channel which I will conclude based on multifarious reasons as stated below. Primarily as mankind kept turning progressive and modern,
Music
 evolved with a variety of tones and rhythms.
This
 led to a mass group ,especially the youngsters who perceived
Music
 as a medium of mere
entertainment
.
Secondly
, the Media and
Entertainment
 industry made
such
 a wrong conception stringer as they were focused on sales and revenues
instead
 of the quality and longevity of the
music
. In principle, the very origin of
music
 was for healing and meditation since the ancient times of Kings and Queens. The kingdom hired many talented musicians who produced heavenly
music
 that lingered across centuries. On top of
this
,
Music
 brings a sense of relaxation and rejuvenation, which is a critical need in today's busy lifestyle. Medical science employs
music
 as an arm of healing. ,
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 to support my opinion, I would like to mention that my Son, favours the modern
music
 of Rap and reggae over traditional folk
music
. Per him, his highest concentration is achieved
while
 he listens to
music
, which conforms to the meditation powers of
Music
. Considering all the above assertions, I am of the opinion that
Music
 is a gifted science that touches every aspect of our life in good times and bad times.
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