the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.

the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.
The table illustrates that the
police
budget
came from three main sources (National Government, Local taxes, and others) in the
years
2017 and 2018 in an area of Britain. The two pie charts show how the money was spent on three sections.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the maximum shares of the
police
budget
earned from the national government in both
years
,
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and the total proportion of the
police
budget
in 2018 was more than that of 2017.
Moreover
, the biggest share of the money was allocated to salaries,
while
technology stood
last
in both pie charts. The national government comprised the largest figures with 175.5m and 177.8m in 2017 and 2018 respectively.
In addition
, the figure for local taxes had a wide disparity by a narrow margin of 11m between 2017 and 2018,
while
that for the latter year was 102.3
m
and more than that for the former. There is little difference between the shares of other sources in two
years
and were almost 38m,
moreover
, the total
police
budget
was 318.6m in 2018. In the pie charts, the biggest proportion accounted for salaries
such
as staff and officers with approximately 3/4 of all proportion. There was no significant difference between the percentages for building and transport in both
years
with 17%.
Although
technology had a considerable share with almost a quarter share in 2018, it had less than 10% in 2017.
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