In some countries, celebrities complain about way about the way media publicize their private lives. Some people say that they should accept it as part of their fame. Do you agree or disagree?

Everyone has their personal life. These days,
superstars
complain about casting their private lives on social
media
, television and other publishing channels.
However
, others think that they should accept it and take it normally.
Therefore
, I totally disagree with
this
notion and I will discuss the reasons in the ensuing paragraphs.
To begin
with, there are several reasons for
this
situation.
Firstly
,
star
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stars
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are
also
human beings, they have the right to live the lives that they want. Everyone has some personal problems that they do not want to publicize in public. When the publishing publicises celebrities' private issues it would impact local
people
.
For example
, in the contemporary era, young stars are following the trend by watching social publishing. Younger
people
are influenced by celebrities but they
did
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not know about real life. Celebrities
also
earn money to influence more
people
.
Therefore
,
superstars
live differently in the real and
reel
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world.
Furthermore
, nowadays, competition exists in all fields
such
as the news industry.
Hence
, the increased number of
broadcasting
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broadcasters
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that competition between
media
would rise. So, the news
try
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to engage
their
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its
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audience
to show
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by showing
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these types of heroes and their personal life.
As a result
, the
media
gain their popularity among others,
Moreover
,
people
do not know what is right or wrong information about stars, when they watch on television or social
media
. publishing
also
spread
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rumours because they want to become popular.
On the contrary
, it
also
diversly affects
superstars
' mental health. In conclusion, because of the aforementioned reasons in terms of human rights and detrimental effects on
superstars
' mental well-being
in particular
and society in general. I disagree, with the view that famous
people
should accept privacy invasion as a part of their reputation.
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