A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter • Explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the musuem • Describe some skill and qualities you have the would be useful • Give details of when you would be available for work

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Dear Maam/Sir, I am writing

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letter to express my sincere interest in volunteering at the museum that was advertised on your website. I want to volunteer for

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job. Let me explain my situation

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since I am on vacation period I want to take

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one-time opportunity to spare my time by volunteering at the museum.

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, I want to learn about different cultures, values and some history in our local area.

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, I want to take

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chance to show off my talent, skills and abilities as a tour guide which I had in my previous work experience.I believe that my skills and passion for organizing events and exhibitions could be of great value to your team and visitors. I am available to start my work from Monday to Wednesday from 9 o'clock in the morning until 5 o'clock in the afternoon. I will be pleased to supply any

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information that you require. Yours Faithfully, Jennie

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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7 paragraphs

161 words

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