Introduction
One group of individuals consider intelligence to be predetermined
as a result
of our genes, Linking Words
while
another group believe that people could definitely become intelligent Linking Words
due to
the education system.Linking Words
Body paragraph 1
On the one hand, some people consider
this
trait to be innate, Linking Words
therefore
a person could have a predisposition to learn quickly. It is known that a child is more likely to have a high IQ levelLinking Words
,
if his relatives work in fields Remove the comma
apply
such
as medicine, politics or economics. A number of scientific research has already shown that there are some genes in our DNA which are responsible for cognitive functions. Linking Words
As a consequence
, some people believe that intelligence is not suitable for everyone.Linking Words
Body paragraph 2
On the other hand
, I agree that it is a human responsibility to improve knowledge in order to reach some goals. Linking Words
To begin
with, surroundings have a massive impact on the development of the brain, Linking Words
therefore
children whoLinking Words
growing
up in families where both parents were well-educated are more likely to be taught how to learn some material properly. Change the form of the verb
grow
Furthermore
, nowadays there are hundreds of books which describe a process of self-improving and help readers to understand the power of studying. Linking Words
For instance
, Linking Words
this
literature is highly recommended by a lot of influencers like Mark Zuckerberg and Ilon Mask who did not have an opportunity to attend private schools and should study alone.Linking Words
Conclusion
To conclude
, despite varying opinions, I reckon that everyone who desires to become a well-educated and intelligent individual could definitely reach Linking Words
this
goal through the long learning process.Linking Words