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The graph below shows the wheat export of three different areas from 1985 to 1990

The graph below shows the wheat export of three different areas from 1985 to 1990
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The line graph illustrates the three different regions for
wheat
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 export between 1985 and 1990.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the three areas are Australia, Canada and European Community. Canada had a produced major export of
wheat
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 and Australia had contributed less amount of
wheat
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.
To begin
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 with, Canada has a fluctuating trend during the period.
Moreover
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, it contributed 20
rates
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 of
wheat
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 production in 1985 ,
as well as
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, it had a zigzag trend it reached a peak in 1988.
Furthermore
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, it exported only 15
rates
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 of the product in 1990.
On the other hand
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, Australia had a plummeting trend during the given years. It exported only 15 per cent of items in 1985 and remained the same during the middle years. Even though it managed to remain the same in the end it exported only 10%.
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, the European Community had an increased variation it exported only 12
rates
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 in 1985 , but it raises to produce 22
rates
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 in 1990.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words wheat, rates with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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