Computer are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is a leading to negative consequences. Discuss both the sides of argument and then give your opinion

One of the social concerns today relates to
computer
being used a
lot
in education.
While
is it widely believe that
this
is a positive affect, others believe that it is leading to negative consequences. In my opinion, let
computer
become apart in
study
will giving more disadvantages. On the one hand, it is argued that
computer
bring benefits for
students
in studying. The main reason is
that is
packed a
lot
of useful informations, but when carrying around, it easier than hold a stack of document, it
also
convienient in writing since we don't have to
use
pen or pencil.
For instance
: almost every student who
study
at university or college always
use
a laptop, ipad or small
computer
to take note all the lesson
instead
of using notebook and pen to write down, it obviously more complex. Another reason is it helping a
lot
in teaching and studying, especially there are situations that school can't afford,
students
can't
study
directly, there will some apps in the
computer
helping the teacher and
students
communicate with eachother. One good illustration of
this
is: in 2020, when covid-19 epidemic was raging, everyone must isolated at home, thank to the development of technology and
also
electronic device, there were variety of apps to used to
such
as zoom, google meet...it really convienience so it undestandable why every school or university used
computer
as a compulsory device.
On the other hand
, it is strongly believed by others that computers leading a bad consequences. People often have
this
opinion because used
computer
for long period of time leading to a
lot
of disease, like shoulder pain, headache and the most common is eyes disease, more details it is short-eyes. Example:
according to
a small page of news in Vietnam, more than 40% of population causing short-eyes, the causes is mainly because electricity device, include
computer
. A second point is that
students
usually getting distracted by stuydying
computer
, not all
students
have enough courages to stay focus for more than 8 hours at class. A particularly good example here is every subjects at school
instead
of IT is
study
in the original ways, like
use
pen to write all the note to the notebook, even tried hard, i can focus only in 3 lessons, i will get sleepy or bored after the lesson 4, but when it come to
computer
, i usually spend most of my time in surfing internet, watching film, it really easy get distracted by the
computer
. In conclusion, it is commonly thought that
study
by
computer
is a positive trends, meanwhile the other assume that it is leading a negative consequences. Personally, I tend to believe that depend on how we
use
the
computer
, but it often bring more negative affect
then
the benefits.
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